Online Development 1 - Making online friends causes problems.

[keannu]

Online Development - Making online friends causes problems.

With the rapid rise in digital devices use in the 21st century, fewer children are playing outside as before due to the rapid use of cell phones by young children. With the epidemic of COVID-19 spreading, children are more and more into the online world and even online classes tend to be created. In reality, there is a way to go to school and academy to make friends
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[tedmc]

Online Development - Making online friends causes problems.

With the rapid [STRIKE]rise in[/STRIKE] increase in the use of digital devices [STRIKE]use[/STRIKE] in the 21st century, fewer children are playing outside as before [STRIKE]due to[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]the rapid use of cell phones by young children[/STRIKE]. With the [STRIKE]epidemic of[/STRIKE] COVID-19 pandemic spreading, children are more and more into the online world and even attending online classes, [STRIKE]tend to be created[/STRIKE] which has become a norm. In reality, there is a way to go to school and academy to make friends
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What do you mean in the last sentence? That is another way to go to school and make friends (albeit virtually)?

An academy is a specialized school; children generally go to schools.

 

[Tdol]

there is a way = it is possible

 

[keannu]

What do you mean in the last sentence? That is another way to go to school and make friends (albeit virtually)?

An academy is a specialized school; children generally go to schools.

It means "method". Doesn't it make sense?

 

[Tarheel]

Perhaps:

You can attend class and make friends online.

 

[Tdol]

Causes or can/may cause?