alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Patrick grabbed Jane's hand. "Come on baby! Let's hit a pub," he said, his eyes flashing with excitement.
Jane took of her blouse, and put on a black tank top. She then slid into tight green pants.
Patrick scratched his head. "I'm not sure if those pants are the right choice."
"Why?"
"Because we are gonna get loose and do lot's of shaking and dancing, honey," he said, shimmying lightly.
Jane rolled her eyes. "I know how to shake it in tight pants."
The hackney drove through the narrow streets, and stopped in front of a posh pub illuminated by a blueish light. The name of the bar, The Horizons, flashed with neon light. There was a huge M&M store next to The Horizons. Patrick and Jane slid out of the car and headed inside the pub packed with diners. "We are gonna have a lot of fun," Patrick said, his voice barely audible over the loud buzz of conversation.
"What?" I can't hear you, P."
Patrick raised his voice. "I'm happy we are here. We are gonna have a lot of fun," he yelled.
"You know what, Patrick? I really feel like having M&Ms. I got a craving for it when we walked by the M&M store next to the pub." She changed her tone, playing with her hair. "Would you please get me some M&Ms?" she said in childish tone. "This pretty girl wants some candy."
Patrick laughed. "You know you don't have to do that to get M&Ms from me, right? Take a seat and order. I'll be right back with your candy."
Jane took a seat, taking in her surroundings. The pub was a melting pot of different people with people from every corner of the globe enjoying a pleasant evening. A football match was playing on the huge TV at the corner of the pub.
A few minutes passed before a waiter approached her table with the menu. "Hello. Are you ready to order?" he said with a smile.
"Not yet. My husband is outside. He'll come back very soon. We'll order together."
Waiting for Patrick, Jane tapped her fingers on the table. She looked at the pub door a few times, growing impatient, deciding to give him a call. Patrick didn't answer his phone. "What the hell?", Jane whispered to herself. She got up from her chair and headed outside.
London was wrapped in a colorful haze. The streets twinkled with neon lights from bars and storefronts. She went inside the M&M store, hoping to find Patrick there. There were three saleswomen inside, all of whom looked to be Asian. Jane stepped towards one of them who had her head buried in her phone. She looked up as Jane approached. "Excuse me, did a tall man with shoulder-length brown hair enter the store to buy candies?" Jane asked.
The saleswoman stared at her with surprise before shaking her head. "We haven't had a customer in the last hour," she said looking back at her phone.
Patrick grabbed Jane's hand. "Come on baby! Let's hit a pub," he said, his eyes flashing with excitement.
Jane took of her blouse, and put on a black tank top. She then slid into tight green pants.
Patrick scratched his head. "I'm not sure if those pants are the right choice."
"Why?"
"Because we are gonna get loose and do lot's of shaking and dancing, honey," he said, shimmying lightly.
Jane rolled her eyes. "I know how to shake it in tight pants."
The hackney drove through the narrow streets, and stopped in front of a posh pub illuminated by a blueish light. The name of the bar, The Horizons, flashed with neon light. There was a huge M&M store next to The Horizons. Patrick and Jane slid out of the car and headed inside the pub packed with diners. "We are gonna have a lot of fun," Patrick said, his voice barely audible over the loud buzz of conversation.
"What?" I can't hear you, P."
Patrick raised his voice. "I'm happy we are here. We are gonna have a lot of fun," he yelled.
"You know what, Patrick? I really feel like having M&Ms. I got a craving for it when we walked by the M&M store next to the pub." She changed her tone, playing with her hair. "Would you please get me some M&Ms?" she said in childish tone. "This pretty girl wants some candy."
Patrick laughed. "You know you don't have to do that to get M&Ms from me, right? Take a seat and order. I'll be right back with your candy."
Jane took a seat, taking in her surroundings. The pub was a melting pot of different people with people from every corner of the globe enjoying a pleasant evening. A football match was playing on the huge TV at the corner of the pub.
A few minutes passed before a waiter approached her table with the menu. "Hello. Are you ready to order?" he said with a smile.
"Not yet. My husband is outside. He'll come back very soon. We'll order together."
Waiting for Patrick, Jane tapped her fingers on the table. She looked at the pub door a few times, growing impatient, deciding to give him a call. Patrick didn't answer his phone. "What the hell?", Jane whispered to herself. She got up from her chair and headed outside.
London was wrapped in a colorful haze. The streets twinkled with neon lights from bars and storefronts. She went inside the M&M store, hoping to find Patrick there. There were three saleswomen inside, all of whom looked to be Asian. Jane stepped towards one of them who had her head buried in her phone. She looked up as Jane approached. "Excuse me, did a tall man with shoulder-length brown hair enter the store to buy candies?" Jane asked.
The saleswoman stared at her with surprise before shaking her head. "We haven't had a customer in the last hour," she said looking back at her phone.