mrmvp
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Hello.
I am writing about the impact of social networking websites on individuals. I believe the overuse of possessive adjectives make the two sentences below sound awkward, aren't they? Should I omit them, if so, do they make the sentences ambiguous?
1. People isolate themselves in their rooms with their cellphones which might lead them to be introverted and lacking successful communication skills.
2. One is supposed to allocate his time for his family and friends.
I am writing about the impact of social networking websites on individuals. I believe the overuse of possessive adjectives make the two sentences below sound awkward, aren't they? Should I omit them, if so, do they make the sentences ambiguous?
1. People isolate themselves in their rooms with their cellphones which might lead them to be introverted and lacking successful communication skills.
2. One is supposed to allocate his time for his family and friends.
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