Pick someone you feel profoundly grateful ever decided to look your way.

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"Pick someone you feel profoundly grateful ever decided to look your way." (From this video, 0:16-0:20)
Is this sentence grammatically correct? I think it should be something like this: "Pick someone that you feel profoundly grateful for and that has ever decided to look your way."

 

[Piscean]

It's fine as it is. You are not asked to pick someone for whom you are grateful. You are grateful that they looked your way,

 

[Tarheel]

I can understand being glad somebody is my friend, but should I be profoundly grateful that somebody decided to look in my direction? I don't think so.