Please find attached the photovoltaic structure drawing

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Dear [Name],
Please find attached the photovoltaic structure drawing layout and a 3D picture of the structure concerning the residence of Mrs. X.
Also note that the contracture needs to make a site before he constructs the structure, the measurement needs to be checked one more time.
 

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I think you need to say, "Please find attached a drawing of the photovoltaic structure ... "

What is the 3D picture a picture of?

I don't understand the next sentence. Do you mean "contractor"?

The phrase " make a site" makes no sense to me.

"The measurements need to be checked one more time" is fine.
 

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@Joj - why is this in the "Text Analysis and Diagramming" sub-forum?
 

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Dear [Name],
Please find attached the photovoltaic structure drawing layout and a 3D picture of the structure concerning for the residence of Mrs. X.
Also note that the contracture contractor needs to make a site visit before he constructs the structure. The measurements needs to be checked one more time.
I am confused, Are the "photovoltaic structure" (structure to support the solar panels I persume) and the latter structure (shown in a 3D picture) the same thing or different? I guess they are the same, in which case you could say:

Please find attached the drawing of the structure supporting the photovoltaic cells and a picture of it in 3-D, for Mrs X's house.
 

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Please find attached the drawing of the structure supporting the photovoltaic cells and a picture of it in 3-D, for Mrs X's house.

Could you please provide us with the cost of the structure?
 

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Again, the picture isn't for Mrs X's house.

Please find attached a drawing and a 3-D picture of the structure proposed for Mrs X's house. The structure will support the photovoltaic cells.
 
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