[Grammar] Please help me to correct these sentences

JRD

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With regards to the meeting held with available members on [Date] regarding issues
raised on the team selection.


It has been noticed that there were many things dealt without proper communication / seeking the consent of all members
We need to have a proper discussion and consensus of opinion on the each subjects which is going to be implementation in the club otherwise it will not be valid.
As for the selection of the team, we need to look on the performance of the player who are on practice regularly. No member shall have authority to select any team player without prior discussion in the core committee. If any player in the regular squad who will be played against our team, shall be removed from our squad
and practice section as well

We,the soccer lovers supporting and running this club because only the passion of the Soccer but no other benefits.

We will continue our support and collective efforts to maintain this club for years to come unless otherwise the things are not as stated above.


 

tedmc

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[STRIKE]With regards[/STRIKE] We refer to the meeting held with [STRIKE]available[/STRIKE] members on [Date] regarding the issues raised on the team selection.

It has been noticed that there were many things dealt with without proper communication / seeking the consent of all members
We need to have a proper discussion and consensus of opinion on the each subject[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE] which is going to be i[STRIKE]mplementation[/STRIKE] in the implemented, otherwise it will not be valid.

As for the selection of the team, we need to look [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] at the performance of the players who are on practice regularly. No member shall have the authority to select any team player without prior discussion in the core committee. If any player in the regular squad [STRIKE]who will be [/STRIKE] is selected to play[STRIKE]ed [/STRIKE]against our team, he shall be removed from our squad and practice section as well.

We,the soccer lovers
are supporting and running this club because [STRIKE]only[/STRIKE] of the passion of the Soccer but no other benefits.

We will continue our support and collective efforts to maintain this club for years to come unless [STRIKE]otherwise[/STRIKE][STRIKE] the [/STRIKE]things are not as stated above.

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