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Zoe2008

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Further to our conversation, please send by the outstanding certificate by this Friday as per your committed to Chris in last meeting. Otherwise, we are no choice to deduce all the outstanding cost from your payment. Furthermore, would you please advise the forwarder details for our preparation?
 

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Further to our conversation, please send us the outstanding certificate by this Friday as you have committed yourself to Chris at the last meeting. Otherwise, we cannot help but deduce all the outstanding cost from your payment. Furthermore, would you please advise us the details of the forwarder for our (further action on this) preparations(for your preparations of what?)?
(Not a teacher)
 

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Further to our conversation, please send by the outstanding certificate by this Friday as per your committed to Chris in last meeting. Otherwise, we are no choice to deduce all the outstanding cost from your payment. Furthermore, would you please advise the forwarder details for our preparation?

Further to our (recent) conversation, please send the outstanding certificate by this Friday, as per your commitment to Chris at your last meeting. If you fail to do so, we will have no choice but to deduct the outstanding costs from your payment. Please advise us how the certificate will be delivered so we can prepare receipt.


My suggested version is above. However, please note that I wasn't sure what you meant by the last sentence so I have guessed at a possible meaning.
 

Zoe2008

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Thanks all.

I would like to retry the last sentence, please review and correct me when you have time, thanks!

Would you please advise the forwarder details / the details of your forwarder for our (further) shipment arrangment.

Regards
Zoe
 
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