[General] Please I would be really appreciated if you correct my following little phrase

[RomaYrinna]

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have written the following phrase to include it in a Holiday card. Could you give me if it is ok please? I will be really appreciated!


A new year is coming
...New hopes to get dreams and goals to come true.

Our best wishes for a coming year filled with joy, happiness, health and success.

Thank you so much in advance.

Best regards,

Roma Blanco Aráoz

 

[Tdol]

...New hopes to get dreams and goals to come true.

This doesn't work for me. How about A new year is coming with fresh opportunities for hope and dreams to come true.

 

[RomaYrinna]

[FONT=arial, sans-serif]Thanks!!! I will use it : )[/FONT]