plz do me a favor in my recommendation letter

[TracyWanggreenlight]

Hi，guys
I'm now applying for the master programs of Waterloo,in Canada,but as a Chinese,my english is not that good,so did my professors.They asked me to write the recommendation letters and they check and then sign their signatures.
I just finished the first one and enclosed in the attenchment
hp ur guys could do me a favor,check mistakes and make the whole letter more special and impressive,its a great opportunity and task for me.
Thank you

 

[TracyWanggreenlight]

It's my first time post sth here and not that easy coz I need to use VPN n the speed is not well.
Anyway,thank you all in advance.