Position of modifier - practise more with him or practise with him more

[DANAU]

Hi.

I have just learnt about the importance of positioning the modifiers to avoid confusion; most books on style advise to place them next to the word they modify. Previously, I would write #1 but now it seems that #2 is more correct. But I am still unsure and need your help.

#1. I will practise with him more on writing.
#2. I will practise more with him on writing.

 

[tedmc]

There is a difference in meaning between #1 and #2.
#2 is about an increase in the frequency of practice.
#1 is a bit vague; it could mean more focus on an area of practice.

 

[emsr2d2]

Neither sentence is clear. Who are you practising with? Who actually needs the practice - you or him? If it's both of you, you could say "He and I (We) will practise our writing more". If you're the teacher, you could use "I will get him to do more writing practice". If you're the student, you could use "With his help, I will do more writing practice".