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Marie1541

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Hello Could someone please tell me if there are any mistakes in the following:

I have also done multiple projects with Photoshop, like retouching pictures or creating images for websites.

Thank you!
 
Hello.

Could someone please tell me if there are any mistakes in the following
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I have also done multiple projects with Photoshop, like retouching pictures or creating images for websites.

Welcome to the forum, Marie.

Your sentence is fine.
 
I agree with Rover though I'd be inclined to use "and" instead of "or".
 
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Yes, use and.

It should be "a sentence" or "one sentence," not "1 sentence."

Multiple is overused, especially by newspaper reporters. In general, words like many, a lot, several, or countless are less wordy and will serve you better in conversation.
 
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