sebayanpendam
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Hi,
I want to describe a movement/ an action about walking through a bush or tall grass but I stumped. I wanted to write along the lines of "He walked carefully through the bushes as his hands pushing the tall grass wide open to make his way to the well". I am not sure whether 'his hands pushing the tall grass wide open' sounds okay.
Thanks in advance
I want to describe a movement/ an action about walking through a bush or tall grass but I stumped. I wanted to write along the lines of "He walked carefully through the bushes as his hands pushing the tall grass wide open to make his way to the well". I am not sure whether 'his hands pushing the tall grass wide open' sounds okay.
Thanks in advance