monsterjazzlicks
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RE: With in, Within, or With an - Question
Hi folks,
I have been trying to write an introduction to a short story and have recently hit a brick wall.
I am trying to describe the fact that two convicts have served (collectively) over thirty years in prison. I will give you the entire sentence for the sake of 'context':
So my question is, please, should the first word(s) be:
I believe it should be the former (as per entire sentence quotation), although I may be wrong.
Many thanks in advance for any kind assistance offered here.
Best,
Paul
I have been trying to write an introduction to a short story and have recently hit a brick wall.
I am trying to describe the fact that two convicts have served (collectively) over thirty years in prison. I will give you the entire sentence for the sake of 'context':
"Within excess of thirty years bird between them – due to the most perfect brainchild of robbing the most perfectly vulnerable drug-store on South Vermont Avenue; during the same night the L.A. filth were operating their biggest ever sting operation! - this was the day for which they had been defacing the scummy walls of their six-foot by sixteen-foot cells with etchings of tally marks."
So my question is, please, should the first word(s) be:
"Within", "With in", or "With an"?
I believe it should be the former (as per entire sentence quotation), although I may be wrong.
Many thanks in advance for any kind assistance offered here.
Best,
Paul
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