tree123
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Would someone correct my writing?
There's a serene crystal clear pond. A white cloud was floating over, and casting her reflection on it. Then the cloud turned into rain, falling into the pond.
When the rain stops, the pond is eagerly looking up the skies again for the white cloud and searching down the becautiful reflection in its heart, yet neither is there. The pond sighs"Alas, whatever I see must just be my illusion."
Reflection of Pond
There's a serene crystal clear pond. A white cloud was floating over, and casting her reflection on it. Then the cloud turned into rain, falling into the pond.
When the rain stops, the pond is eagerly looking up the skies again for the white cloud and searching down the becautiful reflection in its heart, yet neither is there. The pond sighs"Alas, whatever I see must just be my illusion."
