Regretfully

[rajan]

Out of the folllowing two sentences which one is correct?

1)Professors X and Professor Y regretfully conveyed their inability to participate in the convocation ceremony.
2) Professors X and Professor Y regretfully conveyed that they are unable to participate in the convocation ceremony.

 

[tedmc]

Convey to whom? I find both sentences unnatural.

 

[Rover_KE]

Out Which of the following two sentences which one is correct?

1)[space]Professors X and Professor Y regretfully conveyed their inability to participate in the convocation ceremony.
2) Professors X and Professor Y regretfully conveyed that they are unable to participate in the convocation ceremony.

rajan, you've been a member long enough to know that we need the source and author of any text that you did not write yourself.

 

[rajan]

rajan, you've been a member long enough to know that we need the source and author of any text that you did not write yourself.

These are my own sentences. The first sentence was constructed by my colleague on whatsapp. I was confused whether that sentence was right or wrong. The second one was constructed by me. I sensed that it was still wrong. That is why I posted it here to get the guidance.

 

[emsr2d2]

These are my own sentences. The first sentence was constructed written by my colleague on WhatsApp.

That's contradictory. They're not both your sentences if one of them was written by your colleague!

 

[rajan]

That's contradictory.

In any way, it is not connected with any source the link of which I can provide you here.

 

[jutfrank]

You have two options:

1) Professor X and Professor Y
2) Professors X and Y