holdenenglish
Member
- Joined
- Dec 21, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- Hong Kong
Hi teachers
I've drafted the following sentences. Not sure if it's grammatical or not, and whether the semi-colons are used correctly. Could you please advise?
"Hong Kong is where I was born and raised; it is also where I studied, worked, became married and a father-of-two. The best and the toughest moments I experienced happened here. Therefore, I'm concerned about every single thing that happens to this city. I am ready to go a step further for the next generation. In my opinion, the city has looked and felt different in recent years. There is more distrust, more rows, more backbiting and disarray amongst people, instilling the city with nothing but a pessimistic atmosphere; we can't breathe and we feel distressed. I believe that no one wants to see thing getting grey in Hong Kong."
Cheers
Holden
I've drafted the following sentences. Not sure if it's grammatical or not, and whether the semi-colons are used correctly. Could you please advise?
"Hong Kong is where I was born and raised; it is also where I studied, worked, became married and a father-of-two. The best and the toughest moments I experienced happened here. Therefore, I'm concerned about every single thing that happens to this city. I am ready to go a step further for the next generation. In my opinion, the city has looked and felt different in recent years. There is more distrust, more rows, more backbiting and disarray amongst people, instilling the city with nothing but a pessimistic atmosphere; we can't breathe and we feel distressed. I believe that no one wants to see thing getting grey in Hong Kong."
Cheers
Holden
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