alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Is it correct to say overhead lamp shone in someone's eyes?
Is this okay?
She lay on the car's backseat, barely conscious. In her mind, she hovered in a black space until she felt a harsh light shine in her closed eyes. Johnny had turned on the overhead lamp to read the map. He noticed Nicole stir. He immediately turned off the lamp.
Is this okay?
She lay on the car's backseat, barely conscious. In her mind, she hovered in a black space until she felt a harsh light shine in her closed eyes. Johnny had turned on the overhead lamp to read the map. He noticed Nicole stir. He immediately turned off the lamp.