Unfortunately it's based on fact & makes 100% sense.The line doesn't make sense, and it's not a sentence.
The line doesn't make sense, and it's not a sentence.
Unfortunately it's based on fact & makes 100% sense.
Care to write it in a clearer and simpler language?
What's unfortunate? What do you mean by "based on fact"?The line doesn't make sense, and it's not a sentence.
Unfortunately it's based on fact & makes 100% sense.
Is the line your asking about a quote? Where did you get it?
What's unfortunate? What do you mean by "based on fact"?
Is the line your asking about a quote? Where did you get it?
It isn't a quote I took it from something I wrote about a narcissist, I didn't want to go into details just wanted to know if a comma should be used or not lol
Putting a sleeping pill in an ex's - Jack referred to in past Bank of America ads, coffee for some 'alone time.'
It's hard to figure out what the writer is trying to say. Did Jack put a sleeping pill in somebody's coffee?
No, they don't... Someone had the nerve to tell me they put a sleeping pill in an individual's (Jack) coffee for some 'alone time.'Skylar7, let's back up a bit.
Your thread title should contain some of the words you are asking about. A good title would be Jack referred to in past Bank of America ads, coffee for some 'alone time'.
Then start your post by asking'In the following sentence, which I wrote myself, should a comma be used after the word "ads" or could it be omitted?'
Now read the replies you have received and try to rewrite it more simply. Nobody knows what you are trying to say.
No, someone told me they put a sleeping pill in a man named Jack's coffee for some 'alone time'. Unbelievable.
No, they don't. Someone had the nerve to tell me they put a sleeping pill in an individual's (Jack) coffee for some 'alone time'.
No. Someone told me they put a sleeping pill in somebody's (Jack's) coffee for some 'alone time'. Unbelievable!