Similarly

[Offroad]

Dear teachers

Does this read well?

Similarly to my sister and my brother, I should also be given money for all I have done for this family.

Thanks

 

[emsr2d2]

Dear teachers

Does this read well?

Similarly to my sister and my brother, I should also be given money for all I have done for this family.

Thanks

No.

Like my sister and brother, I should ...

You don't want to be treated "similarly to" them - you want to be treated exactly the same as them. Note that you don't need to repeat "my" in the first part.

I might actually reverse and slightly change the sentence in this case: "I should be given money for all I have done for this family, like my brother and sister have been".

 

[Offroad]

How about these?

The same perks given to them, like money and other things, could be extended to me.

 

[Rover_KE]

How about this?

The same perks given to them, like money and other things, should be extended to me.

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