Singer A’s new song was described as a hybrid of R&B and country music

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lovemusic1211

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Which is the most accurate form for the following sentence?

Singer A’s new song was described as a hybrid of R&B and country music, as opposed to his previous ballad releases.
Singer A’s new song was described as a hybrid of R&B and country music, as opposed to his previous ballads.
Singer A’s new song was described as a hybrid of R&B and country music, as opposed to his previous balladic styles.

Also, can I drop the word "music" after "country"?

Thanks for your help! :)
 

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Which is the most accurate form for the following sentence?

Singer A’s new song was described as a hybrid of R&B and country music, as [STRIKE]opposed to[/STRIKE] unlike his previous ballads. [STRIKE]releases.[/STRIKE]
Singer A’s new song was described as a hybrid of R&B and country music, [STRIKE]as opposed to[/STRIKE] unlike his previous ballads.
Singer A’s new song was described as a hybrid of R&B and country music, as opposed to his previous balladic styles. :x:

Also, can I drop the word "music" after "country"?

Thanks for your help! :)

I would keep the word "music" after "country" in this case.

"as opposed to" isn't necessary.

I'd probably say "Unlike his previous releases, which were ballads, A's new song has been described as a hybrid of R&B and country music.
 
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