Slanted inward

[PRD2021]

The round wall art supplied doesn't have circular shape because the bottom part was slightly slanted inward by 8mm.

Would you please tell me if the sentence above is grammatically correct?

 

[SoothingDave]

Gramatically? Yes.

Is it clear what you mean? No.

A picture is worth a thousand words.

 

[emsr2d2]

doesn't have circular shape

isn't circular

 

[tedmc]

The sentence is too vague and does not make sense. What is "round wall art"? A painting/sculpture?
What is "bottom slanting inwards"?

 

[PRD2021]

The sentence is too vague and does not make sense. What is "round wall art"? A painting/sculpture?
What is "bottom slanting inwards"?

It is a large round meal wall decor. Its bottom part is bent slightly. Should I write the following?

The large round metall wall decor supplied was found to be slightly damaged: the bottom part was slightly slanted inward by 8mm

 

[emsr2d2]

It is a large round meal wall decor. Its bottom part is bent slightly. Should I write the following?

The large round metall wall decor supplied was found to be slightly damaged: the bottom part was slightly slanted inward by 8mm

You've managed to spell "metal" wrong twice in one post (with two different misspellings!)

 

[emsr2d2]

Why don't you just say that it wasn't a perfect circle/it wasn't perfectly circular?

 

[tedmc]

Do your mean the botton part of the metal artwork has been dented (due to being knocked)?

 

[PRD2021]

Do your mean the botton part of the metal artwork has been dented (due to being knocked)?

It was a manufacturing defect. It is a metal perforated wall decor. The bottom fame of the wall decor was slightly bent.

 

[emsr2d2]

fame?

 

[PRD2021]

Why don't you just say that it wasn't a perfect circle/it wasn't perfectly circular?

Should I write it as follows?
The large round metal peforated wall decor we received is slightly bent: it was not a perfect circle (The bottom frame was slghtly slanted inward by 8mm)

 

[emsr2d2]

meal

metall

botton

Evidence, should it be needed, that everyone should install an English spell checker on their browser. (It wouldn't have picked up "meal" instead of "metal" because the former is a perfectly good word but ...!)

 

[PRD2021]

fame?

Sorry for the typos. It is frame

 

[emsr2d2]

Sorry for the typos. It is should have said "frame".

 

[emsr2d2]

A picture is worth a thousand words.

I couldn't agree more. I can't picture what you're talking about either. Please post a photo of the type of product you're describing.