so that I can have enough time

[yi-ing]

Could you please check the following?

I like reading books so much that sometimes I have to restrict myself to reading at most two or three a month so that I can have enough time for my other interests, activities and tasks.

 

[tedmc]

I would add a comma after "month".

 

[emsr2d2]

I'd remove "can" and "enough". Just "... so that I have time for my other interests" suffices.

 

[sania-baharat]

I like reading books so much that sometimes I have to restrict myself to reading at most two or three a month so that I have time for my other interests.

Is the following correct too?
I like reading books so much that sometimes I have to restrict myself to reading at most two or three a month. In that way I have time for my other interests.

 

[emsr2d2]

Remove "In". Start with "That way" followed by a comma.

 

[sania-baharat]

Emsr2d2, the following paragraph is extracted from IELTS Vocabulary book. Actually, I learn "In that way" in the book. Is the following wrong as well?

I think that music helps to inspire me while I am working, although my colleagues find it distracting. So I tend to listen with headphones on. In that way I can escape into my own little world.

 

[GoesStation]

It's more natural without in, but it's grammatical either way.