so that I would not need that damaged vertebrate to perform daily chores

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After I recovered from spinal cord TB doctors told me that one of my vertebrates was damaged and I would have to make make lower back muscles strong enough so that I would not need that damaged vertebrate to perform daily chores. Or so, that my muscles could work as a replacement for that damaged vertebrate.

Is it correct to say "so that I would not need that damaged vertebrate to perform daily chores"? Do I need to use "Didn't" or "Wouldn't" after "So that I"? What do we need to use in these kinds of sentences "Did" or "Would"?

Please check my sentences.
 

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After I recovered from spinal-cord TB, my doctors told me that one of my [STRIKE]vertebrates[/STRIKE] vertebrae was damaged and I would have to make make my lower back muscles strong enough so that I would not need that [STRIKE]damaged[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]vertebrate[/STRIKE] vertebra to perform daily chores. Or, so [no comma] [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] my muscles could work as a replacement for that damaged [STRIKE]vertebrate[/STRIKE] vertebra.

Is it correct to say "so that I would not need that damaged [STRIKE]vertebrate[/STRIKE] vertebra to perform daily chores"? Do I need to use "didn't" or "wouldn't" after "so that I"? What do we need to use in these kinds of sentences, "did" or "would"?
Don't use an initial capital to emphasize a word. The bone is a vertebra. Its irregular plural is vertebrae. A vertebrate is an animal with a spine or "backbone".

Wouldn't is the contracted version of would not. They mean the same thing and are both correct. Didn't would not work in your sentence.
 

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Say: I need to strengthen my lower back muscles so that they could be used to perform chores without having to strain my vertebra which is damaged.
 

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Say: I need to strengthen my lower back muscles so that they could be used to perform chores without having to strain my vertebra which is damaged.
Tufguy, this text isn't quite right. I've underlined a mismatched tense and a phrase which could be replaced with a single word in a different location.
 

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I need to strengthen my lower back muscles so that they can be used to perform chores without having to strain my damaged vertebra.

I think can/could could be used.
 

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I need to strengthen my lower back muscles so that they can be used to perform chores without having to strain my damaged vertebra.:tick:

I think can/could could be used.:cross:
"Could" doesn't work there.
 
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