Social media plays an important role in our lives.

[Moc Chi]

Please help me check and fix this .

Social media plays an important role in our lives. Social media is an online platform for online social interaction. Nowadays, almost everyone has become accustomed to social media, or let's say that socia media is one of our most important needs. People can easily do many things through social media. Young people are expects at using social media, even in school. There are several the positive effects of using social media in the classroom which include source of knowledge and learning, offers kindness and empathy, building relationships.

 

[emsr2d2]

You have used "social media" seven times in six sentences. That's overkill. Are you familiar with the use of the referent "it"?

What is the purpose of this text? Was there a prompt or a title? What are you going to do with it once it's been corrected?

 

[Moc Chi]

You have used "social media" seven times in six sentences. That's overkill. Are you familiar with the use of the referent "it"?

What is the purpose of this text? Was there a prompt or a title? What are you going to do with it once it's been corrected?

I use it like an introduction

 

[teechar]

Is it meant to be an introduction for a formal essay or for some kind of informal (or semi-formal) text/speech?

 

[Tarheel]

I will use it as an introduction.

Please finish each statement with a period (full stop).

 

[emsr2d2]

The OP has started another thread with an even longer version of the opening paragraph. I am closing this thread, though I fully expect most of our unanswered questions on this thread to simply transfer over to the new thread!