BlueGreenYellowRed
New member
- Joined
- Jun 29, 2014
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Arabic
- Home Country
- Morocco
- Current Location
- Morocco
Hello everybody !! I am a Beginner Poet, and this is a part of my first poem. So I would you correct it,
and that will be a pleasure from you
-THE EVIL
I was walking along the road alone; mumbling to myself...
what is going on? Then I asked myself.
Why people see me just a thing on the shelve?
Why the Evil would get me in the shell?
Is that because I had a light-hearted won't it in the cell?
or because the freedom needs people like me,
but people like me buzzing like bees
with a word I want to change the world.
and that will be a pleasure from you
-THE EVIL
I was walking along the road alone; mumbling to myself...
what is going on? Then I asked myself.
Why people see me just a thing on the shelve?
Why the Evil would get me in the shell?
Is that because I had a light-hearted won't it in the cell?
or because the freedom needs people like me,
but people like me buzzing like bees
with a word I want to change the world.