Gaya87
Member
- Joined
- Jul 5, 2015
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- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Tamil
- Home Country
- India
- Current Location
- Malaysia
Hi, can someone please help me check the grammars below?
Short Summary
Things turn awry as Ann's hope for a new start in her newly-bought house is crushed to pieces as the "old residents" try to reclaim the house.
Long Summary
Holding the hope for a fresh, new start, Ann and her family move into a new house. However, her hope crushes to pieces as the "old residents" of the house decide that Ann's house is theirs and they will do all they can to reclaim it.
Thank you.
Short Summary
Things turn awry as Ann's hope for a new start in her newly-bought house is crushed to pieces as the "old residents" try to reclaim the house.
Long Summary
Holding the hope for a fresh, new start, Ann and her family move into a new house. However, her hope crushes to pieces as the "old residents" of the house decide that Ann's house is theirs and they will do all they can to reclaim it.
Thank you.