[Essay] take up a hobby

contiluo

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Please help me make the paragraph below sound natural. Thanks a lot.

If you ask me when the happiest time in my life is, I will certainly tell you it’s the days when I was an elementary school student. When I was an elementary school student, I even didn’t know what the word “pressure” meant. Every day, I just went to school, had fun with classmates, and then went back home. I didn’t need to care about my grades of the exams. So I had no pressure from studying. Therefore, I could spend more time taking up some hobbies, such as stamp collecting, drawing, and practicing calligraphy.
 

Tarheel

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Please help me make the paragraph below sound natural. Thanks a lot.

If you ask me when the happiest time in my life was I will certainly tell you it was the days when I was an elementary school student. When I was an elementary school student, I even didn’t know what the word “pressure” meant. Every day, I just went to school, had fun with classmates, and then went back home. I didn't care about my grades or the exams. So I had no pressure to study. Therefore, I could spend more time taking up some hobbies, such as stamp collecting, drawing, and practicing calligraphy.

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