[General] The book you ordered has arrived.

[renee.jj]

I want to inform the customer that goods he ordered has arrived. please help to correct the notice if there is any incorrect sentence as below thank you.

Dear customers:
We are pleased to inform you that the book you ordered has arrived. Please pick up your book purchased on second floor and we will reserve your book for 7 days. Thank you.

 

[emsr2d2]

I want to inform [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] a customer that the goods he ordered [STRIKE]has[/STRIKE] have arrived. Please help [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] me by correcting any errors in the notice below. [STRIKE]if there is any incorrect sentence as below[/STRIKE] Thank you.

Dear [STRIKE]customers:[/STRIKE] John/Mr Smith/customer
We are pleased to inform you that the book you ordered has arrived. Please pick up your book [STRIKE]purchased[/STRIKE] on the second floor. [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] We will [STRIKE]reserve[/STRIKE] keep [STRIKE]your book[/STRIKE] it for 7 days. Thank you.

See above.