the collaboration with whom

[Vladv1]

This is the artist the collaboration with whom won a Grammy.
Does the part in bold sound good? I made up the sentence.

 

[emsr2d2]

With

This is the artist the collaboration with whom I/we/he/she/they won a Grammy.
Does the part in bold sound good? I made up the sentence.

With the addition of one of the words in red, it's technically grammatically correct but it sounds terrible.

This is the artist I/we/he/she/they won a Grammy with.

Have you fallen victim to the myth that you can't finish a sentence with a preposition?

 

[Vladv1]

Thanks. I mean to say that the COLLABORATION won a grammy. To say in on sentence using relative clause what is expreesed by two sentences. 1.I made a collarboration with this artist and the collaboration won a grammy. 2.This is this artist here.

With

With the addition of one of the words in red, it's technically grammatically correct but it sounds terrible.

This is the artist I/we/he/she/they won a Grammy with.

Have you fallen victim to the myth that you can't finish a sentence with a preposition

 

[Skrej]

Thanks. I mean to say that the COLLABORATION won a Grammy. To say in one sentence using relative clause what is expressed by two sentences.
1.I made a collarboration collaboration with this artist and the collaboration won a Grammy.
2.This is this artist here.

You have fallen back into your pattern of carelessly neglecting to proofread your own posts. Note the corrections.

I promised to start locking your threads with careless proofreading, and have done so now for that reason.