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majid72

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Hello


Is the following sentence OK?


The company was established by/after having merged three companies of feed stuff supply company, meat organization and poultry company.


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Hello.

Is the following sentence OK?

The company was established [strike]by/after having merged[/strike] through the merger of three companies: [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] a feed stuff supply company, a meat organization company, and a poultry company.

Thank you.

See above. I don't know what a "meat organization company" is.
 

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Or: "by merging three companies: a feed supply company, a ..."
 
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