[Essay] The Effect of cartoons on

[Salem saud]

​cartoon has agreat influence on children.children like watching cartoon too much.they watch it day and night.more over,they watch it for long hours .All the time,they more from channel to another looking for exciting cartoons.

Cartoon can be useful.It increases the children's
social awareness.cartoon provides children new words and expressions.moreover, it provides them with valuble information a bowt countries and life.It boosts their concentration.

on the other hand, it has passive effects on children. It increase the children's agression. further more, it separates children from their real world. Besides, cartoons may contain unsuitable contents.

we can reduce the passive effects of cartoon. children should have abalance life style. parents should control and limit the time of watching cartoon. Parents should choose the kinds of cartoon for their children.

cartoons become a very important part of our children's life. It has advantages and disadvantages. we should control the kind of cartoon that our children watch.

 

[teechar]

Hello Salem, and welcome to the forum.

​Cartoons [STRIKE]has[/STRIKE] have a great influence on children. Children like watching cartoons, and if they could, [STRIKE]too much.[/STRIKE] they would watch [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] them day and night. Moreover, they watch [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] cartoons for long hours, [STRIKE].All the time,they more[/STRIKE] moving from one channel to another looking for exciting cartoons.

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On the other hand, [STRIKE]it has passive[/STRIKE] cartoons can also have undesirable effects on children. [STRIKE]It[/STRIKE] In some cases, they can teach and encourage aggressive behaviour in [STRIKE]increase the[/STRIKE] children. [STRIKE]'s agression. further more, it separates[/STRIKE] In addition, they can detach children from their real world. Besides, cartoons may contain unsuitable content.

Nevertheless, we can reduce the [STRIKE]passive[/STRIKE] negative effects of cartoons. Children should have a balanced lifestyle, and thus, parents should control and limit what cartoons their children watch and how long they spend watching them. [STRIKE]the time of watching cartoon. Parents should choose the kinds of cartoon for their children.[/STRIKE]

In conclusion, cartoons have become a very important part of our children's life. [STRIKE]It has[/STRIKE] They have certain advantages and disadvantages, and we should control the kind of cartoons that our children watch.

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[Tarheel]

Some free advice. Capitalize the word that begins a sentence. Use an appropriate end mark at the end of every sentence. (Space afterwards but not before.)

Please take note of teechar's corrections.

 

[Tarheel]

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our children's lives