The great Liberation war

Dukul12345

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The great Liberation War is the derivation of our existence. The Liberation War is not just a word in our life. It is the name of an infinite flame in the heart of each and every Bengali. The Liberation War is the Bangalis' glory, pride, spirit and steel-like-firmness. It is Bengalis' inspiration and another name of being stimulated. The Liberation War is our past, present and future. We have to proceed accepting the Liberation War as our torchbearer. Everything including all our achievements, dreams, desires and plans should be based on the spirit of the Liberation War because only the Liberation War is the foundation of our national identity, and the support of our survival and going forward. The history of the Liberation War makes our new generation very joyous, provides them with motivation in the way of life and bestows nationality and self-identity upon them. They are fond of reading books about the Liberation War and it can be noticed that they have a deep/great desire for learning about the Liberation War. The Liberation War is the name of inexhaustible motivation and encouragement of this generation's patriotism. The nature of young generation is to go/run after new things. He wants to know about national identity; He wants to go to own roots. And along this way of life or in this journey of learning, he is motivated by own national history, tradition, common practice, cultural spirit and identity. He stands before 71; he comes to know that the country achieved independence after how much sacrifice, sufferings and bloodshed. Today's new generation has grown up with the steel-like-firmness, spirt, and patriotism of the Liberation War and the proof of which is found in Ekushey book fair and on Independence and Victory day. At every nook and cranny of the country, painting our national flag on their forehead, chest and back and having on national-flag-themed clothes, every youth is seen to be present at Shaheed Minar and National Memorial. It expresses their profound patriotism. The inspiration, spirit and patriotism of 71 are with us, will be with us and forever will be with us.
 

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This is just repetitive rhetoric and praise. Is there a reason for that? What are you trying to achieve with that passage?
 

Dukul12345

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This is just repetitive rhetoric and praise. Is there a reason for that? What are you trying to achieve with that passage?

Nope, there is no specific reason. I have translated those sentences from Bengali and asked here to know whether those sentences are correct or not.
 
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