Mike MC
Member
- Joined
- Dec 23, 2016
- Location
- Iran
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
"This is turn impacts on the standard of care that can be provided as shown by numerous negative media reports about the conditions for both staff and patients."
Shouldn't it be in turn?
"If we are going to maintain the standards of healthcare that we are used to, more funding needs to be found either through taxation and alternative forms of provision should be considered. Otherwise, standards will fall and people’s lives will be put at risk."
There's no either...or structure here and either seems to be redundant and needs to be deleted. What do you think?
Source: Mindset for IELTS 3, Skills Modules
Attached is the whole writing.
Shouldn't it be in turn?
"If we are going to maintain the standards of healthcare that we are used to, more funding needs to be found either through taxation and alternative forms of provision should be considered. Otherwise, standards will fall and people’s lives will be put at risk."
There's no either...or structure here and either seems to be redundant and needs to be deleted. What do you think?
Source: Mindset for IELTS 3, Skills Modules
Attached is the whole writing.
