The multy story banquet hall.

[tufguy]

A banquet hall is a place where marriages and parties are hosted or organised. In a multy story banquet hall more than one marriage function can be organised at once. If two marriages take place at the same time then they arrange for food on ground floor hall for first party and on first floor for second party. They also provide different entry and exit gates for the people. Like a lot of people come to attend different parties (first party or second party). People who want to attend first party they will have to use a different gate whereas a person who wants to attend second party then that person will use a different gate.

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[Tdol]

Why don't you start? You could start with multy.

 

[tufguy]

Why don't you start? You could start with multy.

Sorry I didn't get it. What do you mean by this?

 

[emsr2d2]

Tdol meant that it would be a good start if you checked your own piece before we do. You have used "multy" - this does not exist in English.

 

[tufguy]

A banquet hall is a place where marriages and parties are hosted or organised. In a multi story banquet hall more than one marriage function can be organised at once. If two marriages take place at the same time then they arrange for food on ground floor hall for first party and on first floor for second party. They also provide different entry and exit gates for the people. Like a lot of people come to attend different parties (first party or second party). People who want to attend first party they will have to use a different gate whereas a person who wants to attend second party they will use a different gate.

 

[teechar]

A banquet hall is a place where [STRIKE]marriages[/STRIKE] wedding receptions and other parties are held. [STRIKE]hosted or organised.[/STRIKE] In a multistory banquet hall, more than one [STRIKE]marriage[/STRIKE] function can be [STRIKE]organised[/STRIKE] held at the same time. [STRIKE]once. If two marriages take place at the same time then they arrange for food on ground floor hall for first party and on first floor for second party.[/STRIKE] They also [STRIKE]provide[/STRIKE] typically have different entry and exit [STRIKE]gates[/STRIKE] doors for the guests. [STRIKE]people.[/STRIKE] Like a lot of people come to attend different parties (first party or second party).
People who want to attend first party they will have to use a different gate whereas a person who wants to attend second party they will use a different gate.

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[Tdol]

Sorry I didn't get it. What do you mean by this?

Multi - not multy might be a good start.

 

[tufguy]

I don't understand the text highlighted in green.
The text highlighted in blue is repetitive and unnecessary.

I meant that these banquet halls can host (I don't know whether to use host or hold here) more than one wedding reception at once (like one on the ground floor and one on the first floor). Guests can get confused between two receptions and can enter the wrong reception.

 

[emsr2d2]

You said that the two have separate entrances and exits. Isn't that to ensure that the guests don't get confused?

 

[tufguy]

You said that the two have separate entrances and exits. Isn't that to ensure that the guests don't get confused?

Yes, but still some people get confused and enter the wrong reception.

Are my sentences correct?