The older generation of artists called on traditional opera...

[shihuihsuihaohe]

This is my answer to a translation question on a previous test paper.
"The older generation of artists called on traditional opera to learn from others' advantages, which can make it accesible to more young audience."
Is it natural and grammatically correct?
Thank you if you could help!

 

[teechar]

This is my answer to a translation question on from a previous test paper.
"The older generation of artists called on traditional opera to learn from others' advantages, which can make it accessible to more a younger audience."
Is it natural and grammatically correct?
Thank you if you could for your help!

Note the corrections in red. The underlined parts are ambiguous.