I don't understand why when a person, interested in a language, tries to shares his own thoughts or constructs a sentence, which is grammatically correct, yet sounds nonsensical to others . . . . [You need to complete this sentence. If you use the word when that way, you have to complete the thought.]
As we tried to explain, the sentences you shared needed correction to work.
You may have read the ballad 'The Abbot of Canterbury'. There are a few lines beyond my understanding. The lines are:
"You must rise with the sun, and ride with the same
Until the next morning he rises again;
That is, you must get up at sunrise and ride all day and night.
And then your grace need not make any doubt
But in twenty-four hours you'll ride it about."
I don't know what it refers to, so I can't explain those lines.
How could one, in those times and even today, could possibly travel around the globe in 24 hours? We all know that the earth rotates about its axis each day, which is 24 hours.
The line 'You must rise with the sun, and ride with the same'
suggests that from the point it casts its first ray of the day, you start your journey and keep travelling with it until it rises again. Isn't it odd to say or hear 'rise with sun and travel with it (travel along as it keeps rising and setting), and you will be able to travel the whole world?
That's not what he's saying. He's saying, get up in the morning and go.
Remember that in the 1300s, there was no agreement that the world was round.