alpacinou
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Imagine you intend to describe a scene where a seal was hunted by a shark. What is a verb that can be used to describe the fact that water "became red"?
The seal was killed by the shark, its blood making the water red.
The blood of the seal made the water red.
What verb can be used instead of "make"?
Is there a way the whole sentence can be made more dramatic?
The seal was killed by the shark, its blood making the water red.
The blood of the seal made the water red.
What verb can be used instead of "make"?
Is there a way the whole sentence can be made more dramatic?