JACEK1
Key Member
- Joined
- Feb 10, 2013
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Polish
- Home Country
- Poland
- Current Location
- Poland
Hello everybody!
To the contrary, I have found substantial evidence that indicate that in balance of all probabilities, the cause of the damage is something other than the alleged contamination of the lub oil system during the repairs by the Shipyards in June 2013, which are listed hereunder:
11.4.1 Lub Oil filters were found to have operated satisfactory, with emergency elements clean and by-pass valves closed.
11.4.2 Following repairs in Poland, the engine operated 613 hours until manifestation of the damage. IF some debris had been entrapped in the engine in Poland, the damage would have manifested itself much sooner.
In my opinion, the above sentence could be translated as follows:
To the contrary, I have found considerable evidence which/that indicates that most probably/most likely, the cause of the damage is something other than the alleged contamination of the lub oil system during the repairs by the Shipyards in June 2013, which is listed hereunder:
The word "evidence" applies to "which are listed hereunder" ('which is listed hereunder' should be used).
Thank you.
To the contrary, I have found substantial evidence that indicate that in balance of all probabilities, the cause of the damage is something other than the alleged contamination of the lub oil system during the repairs by the Shipyards in June 2013, which are listed hereunder:
11.4.1 Lub Oil filters were found to have operated satisfactory, with emergency elements clean and by-pass valves closed.
11.4.2 Following repairs in Poland, the engine operated 613 hours until manifestation of the damage. IF some debris had been entrapped in the engine in Poland, the damage would have manifested itself much sooner.
In my opinion, the above sentence could be translated as follows:
To the contrary, I have found considerable evidence which/that indicates that most probably/most likely, the cause of the damage is something other than the alleged contamination of the lub oil system during the repairs by the Shipyards in June 2013, which is listed hereunder:
The word "evidence" applies to "which are listed hereunder" ('which is listed hereunder' should be used).
Thank you.