There’s an iron man...,

[Silverobama]

I went to the mall last night and I saw an iron man there. Here’s the picture. I wrote a sentence:



There’s an iron man built out of logo in the mall; it’s said that it was used of 5,000 logo cubes.

Please help me with a natural sentence.

 

[emsr2d2]

I went to the mall last night and I saw an a Lego Iron Man there. Here’s the a picture.

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I wrote a the following sentence:

There’s an a Lego Iron Man built out of Lego in the mall; it’s said that it was used of consists of 5,000 logo Lego cubes bricks.

1. Well done for using a semi-colon in the final sentence instead of a comma.
2. Note that both Lego and Iron Man are proper nouns so must be capitalised.
3. The individual pieces of Lego are called "bricks" (regardless of the shape).

 

[Silverobama]

There’s a Lego Iron Man in the shopping mall ; it’s said that it consists of 5,000 Lego bricks.

I might say this to some of my friends who are interested in Lego. Is it okay to add "in the shopping mall" to be more specific?

Fixed the typo.

 

[Rover_KE]

First, correct the typo in that post, which you clearly did not check carefully before and after posting.

 

[Silverobama]

Done. I think it's necessary and also natural to add the red phrase and please confirm this for me.

 

[5jj]

Done. I think it's necessary and also natural to add the red phrase. and Please confirm this for me.

See above.

 

[emsr2d2]

There’s a Lego Iron Man in the shopping mall; it’s said that it consists of 5,000 Lego bricks.

I might say this to some of my friends who are interested in Lego. Is it okay to add "in the shopping mall" to be more specific?

Fixed the typo.

I must apologise, @Silverobama. I didn't mean to strike through "in the shopping mall". That was an error. In fact, without giving the location, it wouldn't make sense!

Note that although you retained the semi-colon you added a space before it. That's wrong. Don't put a space before a semi-colon but always put one after.