This aftershave pamphlet

[Twist]

Are my sentences correct?

This aftershave pamphlet fabricated by Jade East is both racist and sexist. Not only is it culturally insensitive for employing an Asian model to promote a product for American men, but the slogan, “If she doesn’t give it to you, get it yourself” and the images illustrated on the flyer are also rife with vacuous innuendos.

 

[Twist]

Have I made any mistakes?

 

[jutfrank]

Use to employ, not for employing.

 

[tedmc]

I think "in employing" also works.

 

[jutfrank]

I think "in employing" also works.

Right—if the it is referring to the pamphlet. Perhaps that's what Twist means, yes. I was reading it as a dummy.

 

[Twist]

Thanks. Where are the buttons emsr2d2 mentioned in my first thread?

 

[Rover_KE]

They'll be in the bottom left-hand corner – like this:

Thank :up:Like