[General] This is to inform you

[suniljain]

This is to inform you that we have furnished the required information as sought by letter dated June 5,2015 and we also understand after having discussion with you that the same has been accepted by HUDCO.

Request you to issue us the no objection certificate at the earliest.

Are the above sentences correct?

 

[emsr2d2]

This is to inform you that we have [STRIKE]furnished[/STRIKE] provided the required information as [STRIKE]sought[/STRIKE] requested [STRIKE]by[/STRIKE] in your letter dated June 5, (space here) 2015 and we [strike]also[/strike] understand, after [STRIKE]having[/STRIKE] [our] discussion with you, that the same has been accepted by HUDCO.

We request [STRIKE]you[/STRIKE] that you [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] issue us the "no objection certificate" at [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] your earliest convenience.

Are the above sentences correct?

See above for my suggested amendments.

I have put quotes around "no objection certificate" to set it apart from the rest of the sentence. If it's the official name of the certificate, I would remove the quotes and call it the No Objection Certificate.

 

[suniljain]

See above for my suggested amendments.

I have put quotes around "no objection certificate" to set it apart from the rest of the sentence. If it's the official name of the certificate, I would remove the quotes and call it the No Objection Certificate.

Thanks for the above correction.
I want to understand if the original postings wrong or the correction is the better way to write.