turn it around

[Kumarc]

The company's sales performance declined, that impacted its revenue, so the management is looking for ways to turn it around.

Is this sentence structure correct?

 

[Rover_KE]

Who wrote that sentence, and in what context?

 

[Tarheel]

Two things. One, it should be no surprise at all that a decrease in sales would adversely affect revenue. Two, the punctuation in that sentence needs to be improved.

 

[Kumarc]

Who wrote that sentence, and in what context?

I only wrote it. I just practicing "turn it around" in the context- improving sales that declined.

 

[emsr2d2]

I only wrote it myself. I was just practicing "turn it around" in the context of improving sales that declined.

 

[Rover_KE]

I wrote it myself. I just practicing "turn it around ..."

In that case, your thread title should be 'turn it around'. Please edit it.

 

[Kumarc]

I tried to edit the title, but there is no option to do so. Could you please guide me with it?

 

[5jj]

I have done it for you.

 

[Tarheel]

I tried to edit the title, but there is no option to do so. Could you please guide me with it?

Probably what happened is that your time for editing the thread title expired.

I think you mean: "Would you tell me how to do it?"

 

[emsr2d2]

I tried to edit the title, but there is no option to do so. Could you please guide me with it?

You can edit your posts, including thread titles, for 24 hours after you post them. After that, if an edit is necessary, only a moderator can do it. Note that no post should be edited if it has already received responses (unless a moderator specifically asks you to edit it).