Union membership cancellation

[poongodi]

Please correct me.

Dear sir,
I would like to cancel my union membership from AIBEA.I want to thank u for the fruitful service you rendered to me while being a member. Due to some inconvenience I am cancelling my membership.

Thanking you

 

[emsr2d2]

Please correct [STRIKE]me[/STRIKE] my letter.

Dear Sir,

I would like to cancel my AIBEA union membership [STRIKE]from AIBEA[/STRIKE] with immediate effect. (space after a full stop) I want to thank you for [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] your [STRIKE]fruitful[/STRIKE] excellent service [STRIKE]you rendered to me[/STRIKE] while [STRIKE]being[/STRIKE] I was a member. [STRIKE]Due to some inconvenience I am cancelling my membership.[/STRIKE]

[STRIKE]Thanking[/STRIKE] Thank you.

See my changes above. Only address the letter to "Dear Sir" if you are certain you are writing to a man. If you don't know the sex, use "Dear Sir/Madam" or "To whom it may concern".