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Hi all,
Please help me correct piece of writing for grammar and vocabulary. Purpose of this writing is for practicing only.
Topic:
Explain some of the ways in humans are damaging the environment. what can government do to address these problem? what can individual people do?
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Nowadays, there are many environmental problems that can be seen almost every day on TVs as well as their effects to humanity. All governments from all over the worlds and every people are working together to mitigate its effects to our lives.
It can be easily seen on the news that tons of different types of toxic chemicals are being transported into rivers and oceans every day or the way that we are damaging the coastline, which cause massive fish death. Take Vietnam for example, there was several strikes from environmental activists against a XXX company, which has been polluting rivers and oceans by exhaust fumes and chemicals they produce every day. In addition, thousands of fish and other marine creatures could be found along the coastline in rotten state near the company. Another way that humans are damaging our surroundings is to destroy a vast area of land in search of fossil fuels or to increase agricultural production. Those actions are increasingly causing impacts of climate changes and global warming such as flash floods and heatwave on the yearly basis.
However, governments and every inhabitants are incorporating together to take steps in order to protect our atmosphere. The simplest solution would be to raise awareness and responsibilities to every people. By raising awareness, people will become well-informed about its harmful impacts such as the global warming as well as climate change. Accountability helps against the consequences of climate change and preserve our environment for future generations. From individual perspective, there are something that we could do. Firstly, every individual should strictly obey any rules and laws. Secondly, every effort should be made to raise awareness among our family members, friends, colleagues and so on about the environmental impacts, such as trying to buy environmentally friendly products whenever possible.
In conclusion, although there are many consequences when people damage our environment, governments and every people are trying to take steps to protect it not only for us but for our future as well.
Please help me correct piece of writing for grammar and vocabulary. Purpose of this writing is for practicing only.
Topic:
Explain some of the ways in humans are damaging the environment. what can government do to address these problem? what can individual people do?
======
Nowadays, there are many environmental problems that can be seen almost every day on TVs as well as their effects to humanity. All governments from all over the worlds and every people are working together to mitigate its effects to our lives.
It can be easily seen on the news that tons of different types of toxic chemicals are being transported into rivers and oceans every day or the way that we are damaging the coastline, which cause massive fish death. Take Vietnam for example, there was several strikes from environmental activists against a XXX company, which has been polluting rivers and oceans by exhaust fumes and chemicals they produce every day. In addition, thousands of fish and other marine creatures could be found along the coastline in rotten state near the company. Another way that humans are damaging our surroundings is to destroy a vast area of land in search of fossil fuels or to increase agricultural production. Those actions are increasingly causing impacts of climate changes and global warming such as flash floods and heatwave on the yearly basis.
However, governments and every inhabitants are incorporating together to take steps in order to protect our atmosphere. The simplest solution would be to raise awareness and responsibilities to every people. By raising awareness, people will become well-informed about its harmful impacts such as the global warming as well as climate change. Accountability helps against the consequences of climate change and preserve our environment for future generations. From individual perspective, there are something that we could do. Firstly, every individual should strictly obey any rules and laws. Secondly, every effort should be made to raise awareness among our family members, friends, colleagues and so on about the environmental impacts, such as trying to buy environmentally friendly products whenever possible.
In conclusion, although there are many consequences when people damage our environment, governments and every people are trying to take steps to protect it not only for us but for our future as well.