We need to create a situation where they wish everyday that they die but they do not

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This is an account of my thinking.

In the present time we see a lot of terrorist attacks. They kill a lot of people just to be killed. Dying is a way of salvation. They are getting freed of all the difficulties after dying. I think instead of killing these people we need to capture them alive. We need to create a situation where they wish everyday that they die but they do not die.

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[STRIKE]This is an account of my thinking.[/STRIKE] The following is my opinion:

[STRIKE]In the present time[/STRIKE] These days/Nowadays, we see a lot of terrorist attacks. [STRIKE]They[/STRIKE] Terrorists kill a lot of people just to be killed themselves. Dying is a way [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] to achieve salvation. They [STRIKE]are getting[/STRIKE] will be freed of all [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] difficulties after dying. I think that, instead of killing [STRIKE]these people[/STRIKE] the terrorists, we [STRIKE]need to[/STRIKE] should capture them alive. We need to create a situation where they wish [STRIKE]everyday[/STRIKE] every day that they were dead. [STRIKE]die but they do not die.[/STRIKE]

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It's grammatically acceptable but I wouldn't say it.
 

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It's grammatically acceptable but I wouldn't say it.

So, what would you say if you had to say "Make them suffer so much that they wish for death every day but do not die"?
 

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Read what I wrote in post #2 again. The way I reworded your final sentence is the way I would say it. Did you think I was suggesting something I wouldn't actually use?
 

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Read what I wrote in post #2 again. The way I reworded your final sentence is the way I would say it. Did you think I was suggesting something I wouldn't actually use?

Okay "They wish they were dead".
 
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