Thank you for your patient work. I like your corrections. There are two things that I want to clarify.
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First, as for ‘I need to use my words to describe the illusion on my paper before it disappears’, you ask ‘On what paper? How is there an illusion on your piece of paper?’
I have to say this is my mistake. I should write something like that: I need to use my words to describe the illusion as soon as possible and put them down on my paper before it disappears.
Second, as for ‘Try to find a
piece (the underlined word doesn't work there. Perhaps you mean "place") of calmness, quietness and nothingness’, I don’t mean to find a place as such. I just want to feel a bit of those things within. So can I say ‘Try to find a bit of calmness, quietness and nothingness’ instead?
So, what about now? Can anything be improved or do you have anything to share?
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Oops, my bad. Yeah, that's something that happens sometimes. When I get up in the morning, half asleep and half awake, some word appears in my mind's eye. The word seems so natural and intimate in some way. I almost instantly write it down. I don’t care whether it's right or wrong. Only the image in my mind matters to me. I need to use my words to describe the illusion as soon as possible and put them down on my paper before it disappears. I regard it as the best way to let my thoughts fly and I know this is my way of relaxing myself in such a crazy world. Try to find a bit of calmness, quietness and nothingness within. Close your eyes for one minute, then take a deep breath; after this, a new day begins. I don’t know if it works for you or not, but undoubtedly it works quite well for me. So, just forget about ‘straightful’, let us enjoy our own world a bit; live this beautiful moment a bit before you see this world with brutal clarity.
