which sentence is grammatical or better?

[runbabyrun]

Which of the following sentences is grammatical or better?

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From 1999 to 2002, when he was studying in xxx Schoo, I worked as his math teacher and class tutor.

From 1999 to 2002, he was studying in xxx Schoo, and I worked as his math teacher and class tutor.

 

[TheParser]

Which of the following sentences is grammatical or better?

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From 1999 to 2002, when he was studying in xxx Schoo, I worked as his math teacher and class tutor.

From 1999 to 2002, he was studying in xxx Schoo, and I worked as his math teacher and class tutor.

********** NOT A TEACHER **********


Runbabyrun,

I most respectfully suggest a few changes in both sentences:

When he was a student at Central High School from 1999 - 2002, I

was his math teacher and class tutor.

He was a student at Central High School from 1999 - 2002, and

I was his math teacher and class tutor.

I personally prefer the first sentence that I have suggested.

********** NOT A TEACHER **********

 

[runbabyrun]

********** NOT A TEACHER **********


Runbabyrun,

I most respectfully suggest a few changes in both sentences:

When he was a student at Central High School from 1999 - 2002, I

was his math teacher and class tutor.

He was a student at Central High School from 1999 - 2002, and

I was his math teacher and class tutor.

I personally prefer the first sentence that I have suggested.

********** NOT A TEACHER **********

Thank you very much!
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