- Joined
- Jul 28, 2009
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- British English
- Home Country
- UK
- Current Location
- UK
I have goals. Please let me know how this sounds.
I want/plan toUp gradeupgrade English, Math, Biology and Chemistry to grade 12, through the ACE program at St Clair. From there, I'll do pre-health at St Clair and then go on to Laboratory Sciences at college. (I still don't know what you mean by "upgrade + name of subject".)
Halfway through (halfway through what?) with good marksIt’llwill allow me to transfer to Laboratory Sciences at the University of Windsor and then to Marine Biology, Mid Reef Doctorate at the University of Australia.
So it will be St Clair college in Windsor, to Laboratory Sciences, mid through with good grades (I don't understand the underlined part at all) to Laboratory Sciences at the University of Windsor, and on to the University of Australia. I'll be back on Monday to follow up!
I'm really not sure you're taking much notice of our advice in our responses. You said in your first post that one of your problems is that you ramble and you're hard to follow - unfortunately, that is still the case. You must write in complete sentences! Do you understand what that means?
You're very inconsistent with your use of capitalisation and your use of full words. In one post, you used "laboratory sciences", "Laboratory Sciences" and "Lab sciences".
As you can see above, there are at least three parts of your post that I can't work out at all. Bear in mind that if you're planning to study for a degree, you're going to be doing a lot of writing and it must be comprehensible.