[Grammar] Why is this sentence incorrect?

[katherines75]

Can you explain, please, why this sentence is incorrect: "Please, ask the doctor for my test results if you see her." At least in the answers it's marked as a sentence with a mistake. Thank you.

 

[Moksha]

Can you explain, please, why this sentence is incorrect: "Please, ask the doctor for my test results if you see her." At least in the answers it's marked as a sentence with a mistake. Thank you.

I wouldn't have used a comma after Please but apart from that nothing.
Was this in answer to a particular question or part of a longer paragraph?

(I am not a teacher)

 

[5jj]

Welcome to the forum, katherine. :hi:

 

[katherines75]

There was just a sentence. The grammar topic is conditional sentences. I feel that the style can be inappropriate but can't explain what exactly is wrong.

 

[5jj]

There was just a sentence. The grammar topic is conditional sentences. I feel that the style can be inappropriate but can't explain what exactly is wrong.

That's because it's not wrong.

ps. Welcome to the forum, Moksha. :hi:

Sorry, your response was helpful, and I didn't notice it was your first post.

 

[emsr2d2]

In my opinion, the comma isn't necessary but it's not incorrect. I can't find anything else wrong.