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[Ksenia]

Hello.

Almost the full execution of orders guarantees the constant availability of company products with its partners.

Please check this sentence for any grammar mistakes.
I wonder if "with" is correct here (The meaning is that partners of a company X buy and then own its products) or should there be "at"?

Thank you.

 

[emsr2d2]

I don't understand it! What does "Almost the full execution of orders" mean?

 

[Ksenia]

Full execution of orders = complete fulfillment of orders.
For example, I always order 100 items. But a company delivers 90-95 items. So, my order is not fulfilled (carried out) to the full extent.
That is why I say "Almost the full execution of orders".

 

[emsr2d2]

So the fact that 5-10% of orders are not fulfilled explains the "constant availability of company products"? That doesn't make sense.

 

[Ksenia]

I need to translate this sentence into English. How can I rephrase it then?

 

[Matthew Wai]

Do you mean 5-10% is just a small percentage, which can explain the "constant availability of company products"?

 

[kilroy65]

"Although the orders are not fully executed, it still guarantees constant availability of the company's products with its partners."

Is this what you mean, Ksenia?

 

[Ksenia]

Metthew Wai, yes, I do.

kilroy65, many thanks, thit is what I mean.

 

[Ksenia]

How do you think is it appropriate to write such things in a compony's profile?

 

[kilroy65]

I'm afraid I don't understand your question. What things?

 

[Matthew Wai]

A high rate of order fulfilment illustrates the constant availability of the company's products for its partners.

 

[Ksenia]

I'm afraid I don't understand your question. What things?

"Although the orders are not fully executed, it still guarantees constant availability of the company's products with its partners." How do you think can I write this in a company's profile? Is it appropriate/necessary information?

 

[Matthew Wai]

the orders are not fully executed

I think the wording might reflect badly on the company.

 

[kilroy65]

I would agree with Matthew's opinion.

 

[emsr2d2]

If you're writing a review of a company, you can write whatever you like as long as it's based on your personal experience. If you're trying to write content to help advertise a company, you should not include anything negative.